Alright, after playing a2, I have to say that I'm really quite happy to see this map.
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Detailing/aesthetic
I've always been an admirer of Torii's demo maps like Lanc and Arugula, and I feel like this map joined that list with ease. The general aesthetic, color palette, and overall attention to detail makes for, to me, a really balanced and refined look. I just really want to say that I appreciate this quite a bit.
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Jumps (demo)
I really like that you made this map decently long, and that you filled that length with fun and interesting jumps. While I think that the spacing is otherwise perfect, the spacing on last could be a bit better. I often found myself not hitting the air-double due to my stickies going too low, so perhaps lowering the floor in that area would be a good idea. Other than that, I think that the spacing is good enough to allow for people with different styles of jumping to approach each jump in enough of their own way to make it fun for themselves. I'm really trying to say that the spacing is good. Another thing that I liked was that you weren't scared of making long jumps. For me at least, long jumps make maps much more satisfying and thus fun, so thank you for this, as I really wish that more mappers would make longer jumps.
I really respect what you've created, so-much-so that I'd say that this is one of my new favorite maps.