jump_lokfeyn_a1

[Lokfeyn_]

Hello , this is my first map I ever made, its a jump map so I figured I would post it here. You may or may not see progress of me learning hammer as you go through jumps since I used this map as a learning thing. The map has 10 jumps , I would say its a T3 map but im not good with tiering so correct me if im wrong ,  its first time that im supposed to give map a tier. Any feedback is welcomed


https://www.dropbox.com/s/b9py1g7xwx52zij/jump_lokfeyn_a1.bsp?dl=0

[donuttt]

nice for a first map. it seems you understood hammer better than a lot of jump mappers that have maps on tempus. personally i hate wallpogo so some of the jumps aren't my cup of tea.
most of the jumps seem doable and i think T3 is a decent tier assumption. i really liked some of the slanted world geometry you have going on.

https://imgur.com/a/0hkgTKN

there is one glaring issue with you map though, and that is texture clarity. some pogo/tele platforms are blue, some are yellow (which doesn't tele you in other places) and others are red. this is a problem you should definetly solve if you are planning on having more people (especially new players) play your map. another texture issue is the lack of visibility of func_nogrenades, i adressed that in my imgur post.

keep it up!

[Lokfeyn_]

nice for a first map. it seems you understood hammer better than a lot of jump mappers that have maps on tempus. personally i hate wallpogo so some of the jumps aren't my cup of tea.
most of the jumps seem doable and i think T3 is a decent tier assumption. i really liked some of the slanted world geometry you have going on.

https://imgur.com/a/0hkgTKN

there is one glaring issue with you map though, and that is texture clarity. some pogo/tele platforms are blue, some are yellow (which doesn't tele you in other places) and others are red. this is a problem you should definetly solve if you are planning on having more people (especially new players) play your map. another texture issue is the lack of visibility of func_nogrenades, i adressed that in my imgur post.

keep it up!

thanks for the feedback i'll be sure to keep in mind these things