Shine | TF2 Jump Movie

[seras/roberto]

This is literally my first try at editing anything! Any feedback at all on how I can improve and what your overall opinion is on the movie is welcomed! 

[Gebobus]

Nice jumps and nice edit. 

almost as good as Light as a Feather ;-)

[RNC1839]

Really good edit.
Simple demo smooths.
Big jumps.
No stupid filters or obnoxious CC.
1080p.

10/10

My only real critiques are that you used stv demos for some of the POV shots, and you should really use frame blending or motion blur during the slowmo shots.

[Sere]

0/10 not enough editing.
Hint: if I can tell what's happening, you're doing it wrong.

[Dr. Heinz]

Cool.

Some jumps are dark, make them brighter.
Remove the black rocket marks with r_drawdecals 0 Either for pov shots, use only pov demos or stv demos, not both mixed.

[seras/roberto]

Thanks for the feedback everyone