jump_spooky

[Washed up hack]

Jump 14 seems to be called "jump 11" on the text in the corner. Also Fractal requests a better indication of where to go on 15.

[200]

If someone still cares, I've added a small broken awful wallkthrough video.

[pants]

That breadmonster jurf thing looks really cool.

Only thing, as others have said, is that you probably need some more visual clues as to where to go, whether that be with lighting (e.g. do like glowing purple/green lights or something thematic around the area you need to go), arrows, props etc; as the walkthrough did look a little confusing at points.

Edit:
Also were you using lawena to record? After a short learning curve its pretty quick and easy to get decent footage. I followed this tutorial on teamfortress.tv (http://www.teamfortress.tv/3521/how-to-make-videos-for-tf2).

Otherwise if you feel you are mostly done with the map there might be people on the forums willing to do a showcase.

[200]

That breadmonster jurf thing looks really cool.

Only thing, as others have said, is that you probably need some more visual clues as to where to go, whether that be with lighting (e.g. do like glowing purple/green lights or something thematic around the area you need to go), arrows, props etc; as the walkthrough did look a little confusing at points.

Edit:
Also were you using lawena to record? After a short learning curve its pretty quick and easy to get decent footage. I followed this tutorial on teamfortress.tv (http://www.teamfortress.tv/3521/how-to-make-videos-for-tf2).

Otherwise if you feel you are mostly done with the map there might be people on the forums willing to do a showcase.

I feel like there are a very few things I should edit to make it final. I'm using a terrible way to make videos - playing demo and just recording it with bandicam, and making some color corrections later. I don't currently have a PC that runs TF2 decently with a good graphics, so yeah - I should probably use lawena, but I only have 120 GB SSD now, as far as I know - lawena chews up disk space a lot.

Also, torii streamed my map today (and it was awful I guess), yay!

[pants]

Lawena is pretty good as you can render the demo files at a set quality no matter your pc specs, it will just take longer the more high quality/framerate or worse your pc is. Main requirement is to have lots of hard-drive space free, long demo files can result in 100gb+ avi files.

[Melon]

You don't need that much space because you can set the file format to a highly compressed JPEG that takes almost no space