Cool map m8. Might want to add screenshots or something.
Definitely a great first map
Edits as I go:
-Pretty standard jumps , a bit of creativity thrown in though
-Course 2 jump 1 is HELLA bright. I love bright maps, but its actually blinding me while I pogo
-Course 2 jump 6 why is the grey dev on the floor there? You don't need it to complete the jump, its just a speedshot.
-Course 2 jump 7 you might want to put some text in explaining this, its kinda awkward
-Course 2 jump 9 is this a catch skip thingy or a telesync thingy or either?
-Course 2 jump 10 the buttons don't respawn quick enough if you fail. This could be annoying if someone was trying to run it on tempus and multiple people were on last
-Course 3 jump 3 is harder than anything that comes after it
-Course 3 jump 10 not very self explanatory
-Only the second and third caps lock themselves when you cap them. No pays attention to cps anyway though.
-Course 3 is either an easy t4 or hard t3
-On jump 10 of each course, Idk if its possible without help as demo, especially course 3. Maybe consider adding a demo-only teleport or something so every demoman on tempus doesn't want to murder you?
Cool map, I like it
« Last Edit: May 25, 2016, 07:29:39 AM by Sere »
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