jump_hello_b1

[Ladyboog]

http://jump.tf/forum/index.php/topic,2409.0.html

[donuttt]

Looks very good.

One thing that seems slightly odd to me is the gravel texture that you used for walls you're supposed to climb, considering the amount of effort you put into detailing. I personally think a different texture (maybe the rock texture you used for the wall jump at the start?) would look slightly more realistic and would also add even more variety to your otherwise good-looking map.

[HOI]

Nice job with the detailing and lighting.

Some minor points to consider:
The teleport destinations on some jumps including 5 are very close to the edge.
The control point doesn't work and the hologram thing above it doesn't spin.
You could add a teleport back to the start.
The shed at the end is missing a roof.
Map is a little short, but not necessarily too short.

Very impressive for first attempt!