Pretty good so far, but this has the same kind of problem that Underworld suffers. The jumps themselves are quite short in length despite them needing/causing lots of speed (like the last one for example). Could you spread the speedy jumps out a bit longer? I find myself hitting walls or trying to crunch in a maneuver that doesn't need to be crunched. The last one is also making me a bit buttmad because I go so fast, but if I fail, I tele back to the beginning so close to the edge that I fall into the water. Normally falling in once or twice is no biggie, but it happens often because I fucking suck at jumping and I miss the hole a lot. The water is also just too low for the beginning platform, so I can't just brush along it until the soldier hops up on his own, I have to jump out to restart. Could you move the tele destination back more or lengthen the start platform on the last one? It's a small nuisance that's bugging the hell out of me.
Pretty nifty otherwise. People should include images in their map posts more as well :I