Jumps were good, Music was fine, general editting was ok.
There are 2 things you really need though: Higher graphics settings when recording (Lawena/Chris' config), and HLAE (third person smoothing stuff).
Also I've said this so many times but I really don't like when there is a cut to third person in the middle of a jump. I prefer full first person then glamour third person stuff, or vice versa. But if there's a really long time where the person is just flying and not actually doing anything, like falling to the ground after a jump, then do anything is fine really. And this is a style sorta thing, and sometimes it's done really well.
And for a couple of the jumps the frame rate just tanked, which sucks quite a bit.
For the jumps some of them weren't really that exciting or difficult. But overall it was still pretty good.
