i counted 16 jumps, here are my thoughts:
jump1: u can avoid doing the ss with a tight strafe maybe lower the ceiling / goal
jump2: idk who this mans is but it took me awhile to figure out to melee the minecraft sword
jump3: another one i wasn't sure what to do but it was simple and ez once i did, maybe make multiple rooms for this so players don't fight over the pumpkin
jump4: simple triple
jump5: epic
jump6: can be skipped by tripling from the pipe before, or going into a pogo from the first crouch bounce, otherwise nice bounces
jump7: i thought i had to go up at first on this, got a little lost. you can also skip the wall sync with another tight strife
jump8: another cool one, probably indicate u need to turn around once u sync
jump9: just some syncs, not much on this
jump10: speedopogo is nice
jump11(?): resyncs nice but this part seems empty, idk just how i felt, if i triple well enough i can't shoot the wall but i still make it either way
jump12: in the showcase you show the ramp sync, but with enough speed this is entirely avoidable with rampshots and wallshots, no syncs
jump13: i beg u as a left wall jumper, add left walls :"(, otherwise good jump. the wall after the second double seems really close to me
jump14: i like this one, no complaints
jump15: nice skip into ss, the curved roof is weird but not entirely in the way
jump16: feels really nice, gj
i feel like this is one of those meme maps which fits with the quirkiness of some of the jumps, i personally think you should leave in some of the tight strafes and skips, but its entirely up to you