Ok I fixed the illegal nonade, that was an embarrassing oversight on my part. I also changed the CP because why not.
RE: Hex's feedback, I dont know where to add a clip brush to fix the rampbugs but it seems like a pretty minor issue. The 2nd jump you feedbacked on is a bit tricky but I'll upload a playthrough video to show how to do it and the last jump soon. The magma platform on last is a catch so you don't have to random bounce it.
I'll wait for some more feedback if I need to change anything else to make it Tempus-Ready? before I upload a v2.