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This is literally my first try at editing anything! Any feedback at all on how I can improve and what your overall opinion is on the movie is welcomed!  :)


Gebobus

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Nice jumps and nice edit.  8)

almost as good as Light as a Feather ;-)


RNC1839

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Really good edit.
Simple demo smooths.
Big jumps.
No stupid filters or obnoxious CC.
1080p. 8)

10/10

My only real critiques are that you used stv demos for some of the POV shots, and you should really use frame blending or motion blur during the slowmo shots.


Sere

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0/10 not enough editing.
Hint: if I can tell what's happening, you're doing it wrong.
"Simplicity is the ultimate form of sophistication." - Leonardo Da Vinci


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Cool.

Some jumps are dark, make them brighter.
Remove the black rocket marks with r_drawdecals 0 Either for pov shots, use only pov demos or stv demos, not both mixed.


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