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Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 03, 2014, 12:02:01 PM
This is literally my first try at editing anything! Any feedback at all on how I can improve and what your overall opinion is on the movie is welcomed!
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Re: Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 03, 2014, 12:46:48 PM
Nice jumps and nice edit.
almost as good as Light as a Feather ;-)
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Re: Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 03, 2014, 02:38:32 PM
Really good edit.
Simple demo smooths.
Big jumps.
No stupid filters or obnoxious CC.
1080p.
10/10
My only real critiques are that you used stv demos for some of the POV shots, and you should really use frame blending or motion blur during the slowmo shots.
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Re: Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 03, 2014, 09:20:17 PM
0/10 not enough editing.
Hint: if I can tell what's happening, you're doing it wrong.
"Simplicity is the ultimate form of sophistication." - Leonardo Da Vinci
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Re: Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 04, 2014, 07:53:07 AM
Cool.
Some jumps are dark, make them brighter.
Remove the black rocket marks with r_drawdecals 0 Either for pov shots, use only pov demos or stv demos, not both mixed.
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Re: Shine | TF2 Jump Movie
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July 04, 2014, 08:01:34 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone
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