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Uploaded the latest version, after texturing everything with wood I realized how amazingly terrible it looked, so I uploaded 2 versions. Any opinion of which texture would be better?
It all seems a bit to dark imo. Maybe have more lighting it might look better also:
  Jump #1: What's that random floating box?
  You didn't number 10, 12, 13, 14, 16
  I personally would change the texture of the ss platform and the ramp on #9 to be different
  on #16 I don't think you need the glass overhead, makes it look a bit more cramped
  Maybe change the floor to a different texture than the walls?
  Add some light the the cap room
  Add some light in the begining room
  Add some light on bonus' 1 & 2

That's about all I could think of doing one run. Hope it helped :)

Overall thoughts
I like the block version because it's much lighter than textured. And I don't like dark maps. I also like maps that are textured... so I'd say go for textured if you light up the map! :D

Hmm okay, I'll need to spend some time to light everything properly and fix the numbering... and also to figure out what textures to use on the different platforms. Thanks for the feedback!  :)
I updated my feedback to include extra things as well as some more jump numbers you missed :3

Hmm, I can see most of the numbers, not sure why it doesn't appear on yours. For the numbers that actually don't appear, I've fixed them and they appear on mine now. Also, I'm gonna be going to properly texture everything and its gonna take quite some time, cuz I'm going overseas for in 4 days for about a week or so.


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Finally uploaded v4, made quite a lot of changes and this is probably gonna be more or less the final, unless any major bugs are found


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