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.sberry

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on: December 31, 2014, 10:18:57 PM
Introducing my very first map, which I did my best to keep it good

13 Intermediate (imo) levels + 2 bonuses
For Soldier
Pretty standard stuff, but still not bad as I thought it could be

To-Do:
• More levels, perhaps a entire new course (hard course)
• Better looking textures and effects
• Custom textures and models

Some screenshots:
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Gimme your feedback, I'll be grateful  ;)
« Last Edit: January 25, 2015, 11:31:55 AM by .sberry »

RNC1839

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Reply #1 on: December 31, 2014, 10:28:50 PM
I'm loving the download link.

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Reply #2 on: December 31, 2014, 10:31:56 PM
Yeah, sorry bout that, had to reupload, got wrong textures on pakrat xD
Here is the link: https://www.mediafire.com/?8dua0x5q6rxdxru

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Reply #3 on: January 01, 2015, 12:16:53 AM
Tele for the quint is in the ground so you get stuck for a little bit. Also for the button jump its a little bit unclear what you have to do, and for the one after that the second skip feels a little close to the first one - might just be me.

Fun map!
« Last Edit: January 01, 2015, 12:21:27 AM by talkingmelon »

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Reply #4 on: January 01, 2015, 08:36:41 AM
Quote from: talkingmelon on January 01, 2015, 12:16:53 AM
Tele for the quint is in the ground so you get stuck for a little bit. Also for the button jump its a little bit unclear what you have to do, and for the one after that the second skip feels a little close to the first one - might just be me.

Fun map!

Alright, gonna fix these for the next version  :) thank you for the feedback

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Reply #5 on: January 01, 2015, 03:59:23 PM
Updated to jump_blackout_a1

Changelog:
- Skips are easily possible now
- Moved teleport destination on the last bonus level
- Changed button texture on 4th course
- Added illumination and changed textures on sync (last level)
- Minor changes on textures on several levels

https://www.mediafire.com/?dpy8eu7buhh2dgq

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Reply #6 on: January 02, 2015, 03:00:38 AM
2nd bonus left wall is shootable, might wanna fix that

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Reply #7 on: January 02, 2015, 07:58:22 AM
Good map. A few jumps are kinda weird but ya know.  ::)

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Reply #8 on: January 02, 2015, 08:59:19 AM
Quote from: Dystopia on January 02, 2015, 03:00:38 AM
2nd bonus left wall is shootable, might wanna fix that
lol how I didn't noticed that...
Thanks, I'll fix for the next version

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Reply #9 on: January 25, 2015, 11:29:01 AM
Finally updated to jump_blackout_a2

Changelog:
- Added more jumps
- Fixed the last bonus wall
- Added numbers for each jump
- Fixed some lightning issues
- Minor bug fixes
- Added a few more detail

DL: https://www.mediafire.com/?73wfoizm80h84jg
« Last Edit: January 25, 2015, 11:31:11 AM by .sberry »

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Reply #10 on: January 25, 2015, 01:36:14 PM
looks pretty snazzy

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