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Here is my first short jump clip I made - Ohotah.
Ohotah - jumping clip HD

Please criticise it so I can improve n stuff


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Maggot
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what is the idea of these "jump" videos? random easy jumps, bad strafes, nothing special

+edit was nice and simple (at least outro), try some coloring or sync with music
   
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Editing was fine I thought, song was good, but yea you're clearly a beginner-level jumper. It does seem a bit silly to put in that much effort with the editing and whatnot with clips like that.

Obviously everyone starts off as a beginner, so don't get discouraged. Honestly it doesn't take much to impress non-jumpers so you'll be able to produce admirable jumps by most people in no time.

And dotdotdot if you were watching closely there were some pan/crops that synced with the music. Slightly zoomed in at the guy's voice at some parts.


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Thanks for the feedback! :)
Yeah, the jumps are kinda terrible, sorry for that. It's more of an editing test.


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