Be warned: The last person who mentioned making jump videos as a log of their personal improvement promptly vanished from the internet after his second video and was never heard of again.
On a more serious note, your jumps could be a bit cleaner. Less hitting corners, less sloppy speedshots, less jumping without looking like you really know where you're going. Some of the jumps in this movie look like you were just holding mouse1 and seeing where it would take you. If you notice in a lot of jump movies, once a jumper has finished a jump, he'll look back at the jump he just did (which serves as a nice mental endpoint to any freestyle jump). Also, use POV demos for firstperson clips; it looks a lot more natural and you get to keep the red pain markers.
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