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Heyo. Klanana suggested I put this here.  :D

Reborn - TF2 Jump Movie


After watching Dellorts 3 videos come out I was inspired to make my own jump movie.
ALSO: This was my first TF2 video ever so the editing is.....meh. I'd appreciate some feedback.

Thanks!
« Last Edit: February 16, 2012, 01:58:51 PM by Klanana »
   
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Woo thanks for posting it here - i fixed the vid for ya too.


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Some decent jumps in there but there were a few things a didn't like..

1-Slamming into a wall, looks very accidental and gives the impression you had no control.
2-Missing pre-fires. it looked as if you missed a few of those pre-fires and just kept going anyway, if you aren't Igoing to use it, don't shoot it.
3-Try to avoid doing jumps as they were intended, especially jumps that are very narrow. eg the jump on heaven, littleman and klanana.

Rest is fine, would be worth using an ammo script too, 4 rockets is VERY restricting.
« Last Edit: February 16, 2012, 05:32:14 PM by Raiin »


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2-Missing pre-fires. it looked as if you missed a few of those pre-fires and just kept going anyway, if you aren't going to use it, don't shoot it.

Definitely.  Makes it look like you just fire rockets and hope they hit, which is sloppy.  Maybe people who don't jump might not notice it as much but it's definitely looks sloppy to most likely anybody who actually jumps.

3-Try to avoid doing jumps as they were intended, especially jumps that are very narrow. eg the jump on heaven, littleman and klanana.

Probably my biggest complaint, especially since the ones you chose were pretty long jumps/had some slow pogos.  Pogo just simply isn't exciting to watch, and I personally would recommend to not include them in a movie.

Would be worth using an ammo script too, 4 rockets is VERY restricting.

http://forums.tf2jump.com/index.php?topic=566.0
there ya go.

All together I'd say it's an alright video for being your first one.


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Thanks for all the feedback! THANK YOU for the ammo script!!!!!!!

..Yeah I'm going to avoid the jumps with longer pogos. They were the last ones I recorded I just needed something time consuming, and I was running out of ideas.
   
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I think it was a good video. Personally I like seeing jumps on 'regular' maps as opposed to jump maps. But sometimes jump maps are cool too.
   
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Here is my 2nd attempt at a movie/video:

Biology - TF2 Jump Video


Again I'd appreciate some feedback.  :D
« Last Edit: March 05, 2012, 10:18:50 AM by Klanana »
   
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Fuck you, I can't airpogo like that. :<
Great job on this video, man.
I really liked it.


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Thanks!!! Glad you enjoyed it.
   
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kinda boring to see the same skips and speedshots on the same stock maps that I've seen a million times before but aside from that it was a big improvement from the last one

edit - yeah I guess I should have mentioned the demo jumps were pretty good, a lot better than the sol ones
« Last Edit: March 05, 2012, 10:13:25 AM by conductor »
   
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kinda boring to see the same skips and speedshots on the same stock maps that I've seen a million times before but aside from that it was a big improvement from the last one

That air pogo on high tower was very good. Enjoyed most of the demo clips as a matter of fact.


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Demo was way more entertaining than soldier. Although I'm impressed at the consistency of your speed shots -- seen it all before. Dem airpogos were on another level.


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A lot of the same old boring soldier speedshots and skips, but they were a little better than from the previous video.  The demo jumps were alright.  Air pogo isd hard


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I went ahead and embedded the vid in the post - all you have to do is put a youtube link in your post and it wlll embed it... sorry our forums don't really say how that works!


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